Sample: LinkedIn rewrite · a fictional candidate and job
Alex Morgan (fictional), applying for Product Analyst at Northwind Pay (fictional). Real output varies with your resume and the job; scores are estimates, not guarantees.
LinkedIn optimizer / Rewrite
Your profile, rewritten
For Product Analyst roles · Fintech & banking · 1–3 years. Suggestions use only what you wrote — check them, then paste into LinkedIn.
Profile checks3 of 7 pass · fixes are in the suggestions below
- Headline names your role and key skillsNow it only says “Business Analyst at Lumen Retail”.
- Headline fits in 220 characters
- About opens with what you do
- About is long enough to say something45 words now. Aim for at least 50.
- Experience bullets include numbers
- Experience has at least 3 bullets1 now.
- Uses 4 of 8 target keywords
Headline
90 characters · LinkedIn allows 220Now
Business Analyst at Lumen Retail
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Product Analyst · SQL, Python, Tableau · Dashboards and checkout reporting at Lumen Retail
Not in what you gave us: Python. Keep it only if true, or edit before using.
About
Your opening lines show before “see more”Now
I work with data at Lumen Retail, where I build weekly sales dashboards in Tableau and write SQL for the marketing team. Before that I interned at Fernhill Logistics analysing delivery times across 12 regions. I studied statistics at the University of Texas at Austin.
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I turn product and sales data into decisions. At Lumen Retail I build the weekly sales dashboards in Tableau that product and marketing teams work from, write the SQL behind them, and work with product managers on checkout reporting. I automated our monthly reporting, cutting preparation from 3 days to 1. Before Lumen Retail, I analysed delivery times across 12 regions at Fernhill Logistics to find the routes with the most late orders. I studied statistics at the University of Texas at Austin. I’m looking for product analyst roles where analysis shapes what gets built. [Add the kinds of products or problems you most want to work on.]
Experience · Lumen Retail
Paste under your Lumen Retail roleNow
Business Analyst, Lumen Retail. Weekly sales dashboards in Tableau. SQL queries for marketing. Checkout reports with product managers. Cut monthly report preparation from 3 days to 1 day by automating data pulls in SQL.
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Business Analyst · Lumen Retail • Build weekly sales dashboards in Tableau used by product and marketing teams • Write SQL for marketing analysis and partner with product managers on checkout reporting • Cut monthly report preparation from 3 days to 1 day by automating data pulls in SQL • [Add a decision your dashboards or checkout reports led to, if you know one.]